However, over the last few weeks, I've kept looking at it on and off, and I've become more and more aware that I'm not really happy with it.
I can't quite put my finger on what I don't like about it, except that I think it looks 'shallow'; there just doesn't appear to be any depth or solidity to it.
I also deviated from my norm and drew it on a pale background. I did this, firstly because I didn't actually have any black paper at the time, and secondly, I know my Mum likes lighter colours but, again, I don't think it did anything for the picture.
So, I decided to do it again, this time on my favourite black background, and, I think I'm much happier with the second version ...
What do you reckon?