I'm now at that 'won't stop fiddling with it' stage, and so I think that is nature's way of telling me that I could benefit from having a fresh pair of eyes look it over.
I don't usually use Beta readers but this fic, at a spit under 6,000 words, is the biggest thing I have ever written in one chunk, and so I'd love a second opinion just to wheedle out any typos, grammatical goolies or plot holes. Posting begins on the 2nd May, so you'll have a few days to play.
If any of you brave souls would like to apply for the job, this ...
Those shoulders should have their own zip code!